"Why don't you
stand up and introduce yourself?"
"Ni hao! Wo shi
Ling."
"Ling in
English please."
"Oh. Please
forgive my Chinese. I meant to say hello my name is Ling."
"Thank
you. Now everyone Ling has just moved
from Singapore so could someone get her a book please?"
The Nice Girl raises her hand. The teacher simply nods in her direction and
moves to the lesson he's written on the board.
Ling has repeated the same dumb Chinese girl act in all her classes so
far today and she's growing tired of it.
But she knows that it's the best way to get people to forget about
her. Well that is after the initial bout
of name calling and ching chang chonging.
But she's has been doing this all day so she's found that most of them
are pretty unoriginal. Like you Jeremiah,
you are officially the seventh person to yell slanty eyes today. Ling has noted
this and is planning your punishment now.
"Hey!" the
overly peppy voice of Nice Girl or Rachel pierces Ling's ears.
"Ni... I mean
hello."
"Do you
remember me? I'm Rachel from first hour."
"Oh yes "
insert false smile here, "Thanks for pointing me to my math class"
"Well we have a
few extra books back here."
"Thanks
again" and another fake smile grips Ling's face.
"Hey can I ask
why you chose Spanish. I mean you could
have taken the ESL class."
"Spanish is a
typical American elective, yes?"
"Well
yeah."
"Then that is
why."
With this Ling wades
through the close packed aisle of the Spanish room, nimbly dodging the
outstretched legs trying to trip her.
After reaching her seat--the only one left it is broken, grafittied, and
situated in the far back of the classroom-- Ling sits down and pulls out her
typical American black notebook. Though
this is a normal occurrence for every student Ling's is a little
different. Perhaps it is the slight
grayish tint of the pages. Or the careful way she handles it. But perhaps the biggest difference is the
words DEATH NOTE written on the cover. The
students pay no mind to Ling or the teacher, instead choosing to text on brand
new iPhones or simply pass notes on pages of paper.
"Rae?"
"Aye
Ling."
"Jeremiah
Hall."
"I don't
recommend it. He has too many
friends."
"He needs to be
taught a lesson. They all do."
"What happened
to blending in? To adapting to your surroundings?"
"I. Can't.
Help. It. There's too much blood
lust."
"Is it
Xue?"
"No. It’s
me. Ling."
"Aye,
Ling. Kill him if you want, I can't stop
you."
"Good"
I like how you developed Ling, it gives me a sense of who she is and how she's going to develop throughout the story. I can't wait to read more! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you very much. And feel free to leave suggestions about how you think the story should go (I don't exactly have it planned out yet).
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