Author's Note: Today we had to write a short story with a serious conversation. Comments appreciated.
On a bright sunny
day I walk down the derelict avenue. Passing the dark brooding buildings.
Looking upon the bent and broken trees, someone's futile attempt to brighten
the scene. Finally I arrived at my destination, a quiet building that looked at
least a little brighter, and perhaps better cared for than the rest. My knock
echoes through the silent lane, as if to mimic death's toll.
"Yes.
Hello?" the face of an old man peaks 'round the door. His head bald and
shining in the light. His face though is hagard, the face of a man burdened
with his stress.
"Hello. May I
come in?" I am still a bit cautious despite being sure of my decision.
We walk a bit
through quiet halls, the sound of buzzing in the distance. The inside of this
place is cleaner than the outside, but at the same time even more
inconspicuous. Finally we reach the end of the hall and enter the room. I had
been here once before, talking over my plan with the same man that stands
before me now.
"Are you still
sure about this?" his voice holds the memories of many times this question
has be met with a no.
"Of
course" on the long walk down the hall I have been only gaining in
determination, now completely sure that this is what I wanted.
"It will be
with you your whole life." he is testing my resolve. But I will not waver.
"I understand
that."
"It could be
painful."
"I'm okay with
that."
"Once you get
this you can't get rid of it."
"How many time
must I tell you I'm sure?" though I still want this his questions are
beginning to bore me.
"Very
well." he seems satisfied with my response. Raising his voice he calls
"Bring him in."
In walks the cutest
little boy I have ever seen. He stands before me and looks up with hopeful
eyes. Then, though his voice seems
strangled with the fear of disappointment, he speaks but one word.
"Mom?"
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